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((The Obligatory OOC Thread...))
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 07, 2008 5:22 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Oh. My.
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 07, 2008 7:19 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Oh! And I wanted to add that I totally <3 Bowels of the City~! Wink It makes me all sorts of happy and warm inside you've used Undertown in it. It's fabulous work, really. You've really captured the essence of it in your own unique way without compromising the original vision and intent.

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PostPosted: Fri Mar 07, 2008 7:21 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Lydia Loran wrote:
Oh! And I wanted to add that I totally <3 Bowels of the City~! Wink It makes me all sorts of happy and warm inside you've used Undertown in it. It's fabulous work, really. You've really captured the essence of it in your own unique way without compromising the original vision and intent.

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Embarassed Thank you. I'm really glad that you approve... I hope nothing in future parts makes you change your mind. Not that I think anything will, but... ::fizzle::

Thank you. ^_^
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 07, 2008 7:21 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'm sure it won't. I'm really looking forward to reading more! Very Happy
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 09, 2008 8:31 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well, that's Part 3 wrapped up. I really hadn't planned on this thing being quite so long... but they do have a tendency to grow on you, once you get down into it.

With luck, Part 4 will be quicker. It will definitely involve more ACTION!, and Paladin should make a better showing of himself than he did last time he encountered the... slime... thing... creature. Whatever the hell it is.

Thanks for all your patience, guys! Very Happy
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 10, 2008 8:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Two things I've really liked in Bowels of the City so far (other than your fantastic prose):

The image of the slowly digested kids stuck in the creature, like they've gotten caught in some giant jello mold. That there is effed up - just the way I like it.

AND the Flynn LOVE/HATE thing. That's a nice writerly touch.

Well done. Bring on the action.
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 11, 2008 12:21 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Luna Eva wrote:
Two things I've really liked in Bowels of the City so far (other than your fantastic prose):

The image of the slowly digested kids stuck in the creature, like they've gotten caught in some giant jello mold. That there is effed up - just the way I like it.

AND the Flynn LOVE/HATE thing. That's a nice writerly touch.

Well done. Bring on the action.


I would be in agreement!
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 11, 2008 2:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks, guys. Smile I'm really glad to see BotC so well received. ^_^

I picture part four being in three parts, the first of which has been posted; the second has been written, but needs some revisions and typing, and the third should be along shortly. Thanks again for everyone's patience and kind words!
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 4:10 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Paladin go *BOOM*!! Oh noez!

Much luv to BotC! And Paladin in general!
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 4:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sorry I'm a bit late on this overdue praise......but I also am adoring your BotC thread!

Your writing skills are downright awesome & that vile creature is simply divine! Twisted Evil

Well done! More please.....

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PostPosted: Thu Mar 13, 2008 3:06 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hello!

I just wanted to tell you how much I am enjoying your writings in the WestEnd. They are so wonderful! The imagery is fantastic! You help the district live and breathe with what you put out. Thank you!!

I love the fact you've utilized some of the shared Local Color I've put out there, and I love even more that you've added some of your own. Your tellings rock!!

And, yes, "Bowels of the City" kicks frellin' arse!!
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 13, 2008 1:04 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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PostPosted: Thu Mar 13, 2008 1:12 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

And so it ends. ::flop::

Thank you, everyone, for sticking through to the end; I hope I've not disappointed anyone's high hopes. Thank you, profusely, for your comments, your support, and your positive feedback. L, Sid, thank you for the concepts that I've borrowed, and I hope I've done them justice.

This marks the conclusion of The Bowels of the City, the longest story I've ever actually completed. Shocked I've done longer for NaNoWriMo, but actually working in that ~Fin~, that's a new one for me. So thank you, once again, and I hope you'll find my next offering - when I figure out what it will be - just as enjoyable. Very Happy
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 18, 2008 11:35 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Posted a description of the WestEnd, as I see it, here. Just in case anyone's curious. Smile
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 19, 2008 12:23 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Nice!
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